Response to Tutor feedback - ASS 2

RESPONSE TO FEEDBACK 

Thank You for the feedback, firstly my textual commentary was, as I explained by email, in and around my photos on my word document, which I had put on Dropbox and you have since seen.

I note your comments on lighting, which I am still learning. I am reading the book you recommended
'The basics of Photography - Lighting' but I must say I found this section to have so much reading that I haven't read much of it.  But its there and I will ..

I have taken on board your comments on the photos.  The one of Grandma with baby, should be looking at the baby and not the camera.  I do have one of dad and baby and he doing just that so I might use this image.

Its funny how when you point out (the obvious ) you can see it for yourself and I too was thinking that about looking at the camera but was focusing more on the 'adoration' of grandma rather than the exact image.  All a learning process.

All blog now fully up to date, any gaps now filled.